Crochet Light and Lively Tank

I made an attempt at this light & lively tank pattern a year ago and I failed due to lack of experience. I've returned using Moda Dea's Tweedle Dee yarn.

One skein of cinnamon and the other, blackberry! I'm starting sagebrush. This pattern needed to be modified, it's not busty friendly. It shows crazy amounts of cleavage and is deemed unwearable :| I'm toying with the idea of a corset design in the front.

I don't like this enough yet.

Here is an update: